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 Post subject: Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky
Posted: Apr 11th, '14, 16:48    


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I thought it was good!

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 Post subject: Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky
Posted: Apr 11th, '15, 07:17    


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Beautiful poem, Isabelle!
It's been awhile since I've read such lovely imagery.
I think your rhythm is splendid, and your word choice is excellent.

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 Post subject: Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky
Posted: Mar 9th, '19, 11:56    


Adalrico

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It was beautiful, thank you. :candy:

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 Post subject: Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky
Posted: Jan 20th, '20, 00:30    


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i like it :qh: , except the 3rd line: That danced above the gentle waves

I think it would sounds better as:
Dancing above the gentle waves

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