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~poem~ The Liquid Sky

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Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky

Posted: Apr 11th, '14, 16:48
by ambrosyne
I thought it was good!

Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky

Posted: Apr 11th, '15, 07:17
by Fire
Beautiful poem, Isabelle!
It's been awhile since I've read such lovely imagery.
I think your rhythm is splendid, and your word choice is excellent.

Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky

Posted: Mar 9th, '19, 11:56
by Adalrico
It was beautiful, thank you. :candy:

Re: ~poem~ The Liquid Sky

Posted: Jan 20th, '20, 00:30
by Bunnei
i like it :qh: , except the 3rd line: That danced above the gentle waves

I think it would sounds better as:
Dancing above the gentle waves
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