The only thing I'd change, Hikari, is inking the drawing. Really makes it pop. You don't have to go overboard, just use a skinny Sharpie or a ballpoint pen.

If you want someone more feminine, try making her hips more rounded, her breasts slightly more pronounced (slightly...if she's a pirate and is running around a lot, plus she's young, they wouldn't be huge), and making her hair slightly longer.

Hikarisoul16 wrote:@Everlasting Universe: I misplaced my nice inking pen, which is why I didn't originally ink it. ^^; I was thinking about the hair thing, but the hips idea is pretty good. :D I'll probably go with the idea that she doesn't want to be recognized as a girl, since it probably makes people not take her as seriously.

Aww. I hate misplacing my materials. ><;

That would make sense. I know my character (who I still need to draw) is going to dress more like a man, but still be clearly feminine. You can bind breasts, but do nothing about hips.

Mmmrrhh I was gonna work on art today but the power keeps flickering. I don't wanna risk losing a bunch of work. :< Maybe I'll just put on some DVD and click around Knuffel looking for sunflowers. xD

@Hikari: I like the drawing. P: Though we have yet to have an actual girl pirate that looks feminine all the way through. xD;

@Tori: Aw. D: I hope the grayness goes away soon for you~

@Sierrie: I'd work on art if not for the fact that I'm kinda stuck with colors and too lazy to work on stuff. Which I really should be doing. >>;