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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Mar 27th, '13, 21:54    


ml1201

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You have hugged ml1201!

I hope the revised version is just as cute, I want to adopt her. XD

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 5th, '13, 05:31    


Eruvandir

Joined: Feb 15th, '09, 12:48
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Hello~
I need your help guys~

KOfK Wild Knuffel wrote:Your Wild Knuffel 'OC - Gerard' was checked and was rejected due to the following reason:

Multiple / other reasons (as stated below)

Stages too similar / No evolution
For more info please take a look at this thread:
viewtopic.php?f=12&t=46087

Better luck next time!

This is the knuffel ...
http://elaine3305.deviantart.com/art/Ge ... -369537420
http://elaine3305.deviantart.com/art/Ge ... -369565293
http://elaine3305.deviantart.com/art/Ge ... -369572318
http://elaine3305.deviantart.com/art/Ge ... -369588166
http://elaine3305.deviantart.com/art/Ge ... 95654&qo=1

I know that the clothes didn't change much .. the hair too ... so I'll be working on that =)
But do you guys know if I could add anything else?
Or if there's something I'm missing?

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 5th, '13, 10:11    


amalath

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What you said yourself, only thing that's really visible between 1 and 5 is the flower. And I'm not even sure if it should be counted as knuffel evolution. If someone asked me to describe stage 1 and 5 in short sentences it would be "Boy in black shorts and top" and "Boy in black shorts and t-shirt". Long story short: he hardly changes at all and he's same thing in stage 1 and 5.
You could start with something much simpler: boy only in very short shorts (no bandana or top) and very short hair. Then in next stages add white top, then make it into t-shirt, add print, make something visible with shorts and hair, add small thin bandana, then next stage make it bigger with print etc. You should add bit more elements as well to add more to evolving, but hard for me to suggest something since he's your oc, so not sure what would fit or not. But yeah, bigger shoes, socks, undershirt, purple strands in hair, body parts (for some reason cat ears and tail seem like they'd fit him).

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 5th, '13, 11:14    


TimTam

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I know he's your character, so changing him a lot might not be something you'd want to do, but I think it'd be cool if he became that flower! :)

I know you likely don't want to do that, but just looking at the pics made me imagine it. ^_^

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 5th, '13, 14:17    


Eruvandir

Joined: Feb 15th, '09, 12:48
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@ amalath - thanks! ^_^
And yeah, cat ears & tail really looks cute on him! >w<

@ TimTam - I was thinking of making flowers grow on him O_O
He'd be a part of the flower O_O

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 5th, '13, 14:25    


TimTam

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I think that would work if that's what you want. It means he changes from an ordinary boy into something different so would fit the whole evolving thing. ;)

I'm curious to see what you do. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 6th, '13, 13:54    


Eruvandir

Joined: Feb 15th, '09, 12:48
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Thanks ^_^

Kinda busy though ... so I haven't started working on changing him yet XP

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 7th, '13, 18:32    


LeannaAnne

Joined: Jul 24th, '09, 11:56
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Hey there, i wonderd if i could get some advice to improve my knuffel so he won't be rejected again ^-^;;

I made my knuffel when wild knuffels were just new so the rules have gotten sharper, wich is why i'm asking for some advice :)

My knuffel starts as a tramp to end up as a merchant, but one of his features is that he has a basket wich will fill up with stuff during his stages. But i also gave him 2 boxes to show an increased wealth. Here's a preview of what i mean: -X-

I actually don't want to get rid of the boxes, they are practically a part of the knuffel but they aren't direcly connected. Any suggestions how i can make them fit in the rules?

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 7th, '13, 20:07    


witch77

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how about a sacked belt? like one bag on each side of the belt?

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 Post subject: Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 8th, '13, 03:00    


Moi

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This knuffel will not upload.
It keeps saying image one is the wrong size.
I took it in Photoshop and lined it up with the sample one.
So I don't understand why the hell it's the wrong size.

http://i.imgur.com/GfK3B0y.png
http://i.imgur.com/Rccr6ue.png
http://i.imgur.com/qAIjnt6.png
http://i.imgur.com/6sGV2Za.png
http://i.imgur.com/ITg5sg4.png

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