Firn wrote:It is hard to tell for me without actually seeing how it is done. The image you posted above is pretty gross in my opinion already and I would not want something like this as part of this site. But it might look quite different if it was Knuffel-fied, so I cannot tell for sure.
Though I can tell you that the risk of a Knuffel containing gore getting rejected is pretty high.

aw, that sucks

it'd be a lot cuter as a knuffel but not worth making if there's a high risk of rejection.

thank you for the input

my knuffel was recently rejected and I was wondering, I resized her a little bigger but she looks extremely tall now. I was just curious, if the size comparison is still off. Because if I resubmit her, I just want to make sure she's okay. =)


actually I'm not sure if I can resize her. Her proportions are all wacky when I try and then her hair gets too big for frame. =(

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Ok! Tell me what is wrong with him! :/

Wiltherel - I think you could make your stage 3 stage 1. The evolution after three are really nice. I think from your final stage, you could take the character farther. Like he gets bigger horns his scarf is bigger and flowy maybe there are like birds around him. Maybe final stage he has some kind of wings. Go crazy with him.
Look at it like this with firn's knuffel:
Yay we have a fairy boy by stage 3! http://i1154.photobucket.com/albums/p52 ... a/A5S3.png
But on stage 5 we have like, a crazy epic awesome all over the place fairy boy! http://i1154.photobucket.com/albums/p52 ... a/A5S5.png
You seem to get so stuck on these characters but just normal character don't leave you with a lot of room to work with, I think thats where your struggling. you seem to be afraid to take the character farther. Yes maybe you want to stick true to the character, but think of it like what if this character was a god or in over drive state. Its like what I did with Drakerin, He becomes Rin, But then he becomes a bahamut.
Keep in mind. if people like the character, They can set it to that stage when they Max it out. This is why I try to make every stage like its own character so that maybe people would want to adopt two.

You also need to remember 3, the golden number, changes. stage 1 and 2 have like two. And it cant be small things like a bracelet or clip.

Luluannabell - I think some of what I said here could help you too. =3

From stage 1 to 2, I seem mostly two changes. (hair and outfit) The tail is too small to would count. I think your knuffel kind of borders what on the first page of this topic, 3. Artistic Standards. You have a lot of white with some look like scribbles on him. I think you shoudl define what his out fit looks a bit more add some kind of shading and maby define the red and blue lines a bit more.
It made me think of elvis so maybe some of these pics an help inspire.
http://www.cinemaretro.com/uploads/elivsjumpsuit.jpg
http://photos-2.posh24.com/p/1581375/z/ ... ded_su.jpg
http://www.retroplanet.com/mm5/graphics ... /25247.jpg
Meh I thought there would be more lines, but I'm sure you cold make something like that with lines or even both line and bots.
You could even use some other shades of grays to spiff him up.

As a bit of art feedback two. I think on final stage you can bring the tail away from his body a bit so he is not so cluttered looking. =3