Kc ~ It looks good!
I also have problems with profiles ~ Also I think I just might know who those love birds are *wink*

Vin - That's just too exciting! If you're really sure, let's have a serious chat and this could happen! I just need to know you're sure and I can have the room ready for you :D

KC - Your drawing is good, you can get a real sense of their feelings; I think your profiles would improve if you increase the distance between the neck and the chin a bit, especially for characters who are looking straight forwards, like the boy on the right

I’m very, very, very sure!
I just ran and told my mother and she's happy about it.
How much would rent be around? Just so I can start to plan.

I'll PM you ;)

Please do

Actually they were to be sitting forward next to each other looking at each other. (failed)
But yes I should have there necks back regardless...

Its something with how it draw profiles. If I fix what I think should be right it looks horridly wrong to me. =/
But I think everyone's profiles are different. there is no unified way they look, in anime or real life.

I actually quite like drawing profiles... In class and things doodling people's profiles is the easiest way to draw people without them noticing
Maybe I got lots of practice through that.

Ah! So that’s the secret of your talent *eats you up so to get your talent*
That’s a very good idea. They think you are writing, but your actually drawing them ^^

KC ~ You didn't fail