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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 06:40
by LilChaosKitten
LilChaosKitten wrote:
I have thus far submitted the following versions of Guianna,
and they keep getting rejected?....

Help? D:

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Alright.... I know it's a long shot....
But I'm trying again.... >.<;;


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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 08:54
by Sunlight

Why don't you give her some accessories that stay with the theme? Like a belt? More details on her boots/shirt? a red ribbon tying her hair back? Some more rings on her ears? I'm not sure if there's still enough changes.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 18:41
by Firn
I am really sorry Chaos, I hate it when people try and try and I still have to turn them down, but I still do not see anything added since your first attempt. It is like I am constantly looking at the same images? What did you change? :mcshock:

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 18:55
by casey
Maybe the ears starting out small and progressively growing bigger would be a nice bet, as would be the back of her hair becoming long instead of just being short all the time? I'd also draw something more complex instead of the skirt/top formula, because those elements aren't changing at all and they're very simple.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 19:20
by LilChaosKitten
Firn wrote:I am really sorry Chaos, I hate it when people try and try and I still have to turn them down, but I still do not see anything added since your first attempt. It is like I am constantly looking at the same images? What did you change? :mcshock:

You see no changes? D:

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From 1st Attempt to 3rd attempt :
- Stage 1 : No Change
- Stage 2 : One Eye open, Shorts instead of Panties, & The Start of shoes
- Stage 3 : Armband Design, No Ear Tassels, Both Eyes Open
- Stage 4 : No side hair, Boot cuffs gone, & Arm Bracelet
- Stage 5 : Leg Scar & Arm Bracelet + Design


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Hope that helps my case a bit? :(

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 19:39
by Firn
Sorry Chaos, but that is just tiny details added, like the bracelet, or in the case of the side hair, or the eyes you just made it evolve at some other point, but changing the time when something evolves does not make up for the lack of overall evolutionary elements the Knuffel has. :mcsad:

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 19:43
by Wiltherel
I have a question about a design I might do soon..
Is there a rule about making messy hair become flat/more stylized slowly?
I want to make sure.. There will be more elements in the wild, but I want to be sure about the hair thing.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 14th, '13, 20:35
by Firn
Kind of like reversed evolution? It is not forbidden, you can do that, though it will not count towards the overal evolution.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 15th, '13, 10:18
by Ziaheart
Honestly, I had to strain to see the differences, too. Which is why I suggest more complexity. Like a belt, earrings, hair tie, and more complex design of shirt/skirt. Another I like doing when I'm making my Knuffel is that I make their colour change. So maybe she can start off pale with blond hair and green/blue eyes and slowly darken and have her eyes turn slowly more turquoise. You could also give her a gem on her necklace to make more changes.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Nov 16th, '13, 09:55
by Firn
Ziaheart wrote:Honestly, I had to strain to see the differences, too. Which is why I suggest more complexity. Like a belt, earrings, hair tie, and more complex design of shirt/skirt. Another I like doing when I'm making my Knuffel is that I make their colour change. So maybe she can start off pale with blond hair and green/blue eyes and slowly darken and have her eyes turn slowly more turquoise. You could also give her a gem on her necklace to make more changes.
Zia, things like a gem on her necklace or earrings will really not help this Knuffell, these are all just more tiny changes. I don't want Chaos to get her hopes up and then be rejected again. This Knuffel needs some major BIG additions, or it won't work. :qmeh: