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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 29th, '14, 02:55
by Fiel-kun
elaine3305 wrote:I'm asking for help or advice >.<
This is Gerard:
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I've made a change since I last submitted him (hair color) ... but I'm not sure if it's enough >.<
Wow Elaine, you're designing your own Wild Knuffel? That's cool!
Gerard looks great here :)
Hmmm... how about you add wings or tails on him and if you like, instead of the flower, how about you give him a sword or a spear? or a radio? or an mp3 player plus headset plus a backpack? It's all up to you. Just throwing in some ideas hehe
Goodluck!
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 29th, '14, 08:31
by Ziaheart
Since your theme seems to be a flower and... poison? How about random flowers that spring up every where, like in the hair and such? Limbs that turn into vines/poison clouds? Maybe add a skull to show off your pirate jui- I mean, that he's poisonous?
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 30th, '14, 06:07
by Eruvandir
fielkun wrote:Wow Elaine, you're designing your own Wild Knuffel? That's cool!
Gerard looks great here :)
Hmmm... how about you add wings or tails on him and if you like, instead of the flower, how about you give him a sword or a spear? or a radio? or an mp3 player plus headset plus a backpack? It's all up to you. Just throwing in some ideas hehe
Goodluck!
Yep~ Gerard is my ... 10th wild knuffel =)
I've had too many knuffels with wings XP
But thanks for the ideas =)
Ziaheart wrote:Since your theme seems to be a flower and... poison? How about random flowers that spring up every where, like in the hair and such? Limbs that turn into vines/poison clouds? Maybe add a skull to show off your pirate jui- I mean, that he's poisonous?
Pirate juice? Haha xD
I was already considering placing little flower babies growing on him~
Thanks~
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 30th, '14, 08:26
by Fiel-kun
@elaine
Since you are from Baguio City, have you ever thought of making an "Ifugao/Igorot" styled Wild Knuffel? That would look awesome and unique!
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 30th, '14, 09:37
by Eruvandir
You're right! =O
... But I barely know anything about the Igorots -__-"
I have to do some research on their folk lore =)
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: May 30th, '14, 10:22
by Ziaheart
Excellent.
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Jun 6th, '14, 21:19
by Hypocube
Hi. I'm kind of really new, but I want to make a wild knuffel. Most of it's just sketches right now, but I'd really appreciate any comments, critiques, or suggestions you're willing to offer before it ready to submit.
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Jun 6th, '14, 21:43
by ml1201
For the fourth stage I'd do fewer of the tails so that some can appear in the fifth stage to help give it more changes. The fourth has a large number of changes but there seems very little in the fifth stage.
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Jun 6th, '14, 22:01
by Hypocube
Thanks for the advice! I reduced the number of tails to 5 in stage4 and added a few things to stage five. Is this better, or do you think I still need more changes?
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Jun 6th, '14, 22:10
by Eylis
Ooh, a fox! I like it
Changes seems better now, even if for the first 2-3 stages I'm not totally sure that they'll be enough... it depends of if you want to allow people to see spoilers or not...
