Kingdom of Knuffel

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hm


when it says this

"Activity 18
Key in the text provided here, perform a spelling and grammar check and proofread and correct any errors.

Save as activity18 and upload for assessment."

does that mean type it up in word and save as word doc but all fixed up?

I'm using word cause activity 17 was in word. :)

So this is what activity 18 is before - http://trainingqld.elearninglogin.com/r ... /Act18.pdf

this is erm my version

"Activity 18


A computer is a machine for manipulating data according to a list of instructions. Computers take various physical forms. Early electronic computers were the size of a large room, consuming as much power as several hundred personal computers. Today computers can be made small enough to fit into a wrist watch and be powered from a watch battery. Society has come to recognise personal computers and their portable equivalent, the laptop computer, as icons of the information age; they are what most people think as a computer. "


it looks pretty good, spelling and grammar wise?

Haha, I got access denied XD

Hmmm ....

Kaelin wrote:"Activity 18


A computer is a machine for manipulating data according to a list of instructions. Computers take various physical forms. Early electronic computers were the size of a large room, consuming as much power as several hundred personal computers. Today, computers can be made small enough to fit into a wrist watch and be powered from a watch battery. Society has come to recognize personal computers and their portable equivalent, the laptop computer, as icons of the information age; they are what most people think as a computer. "

Though if I were to do the proofreading, I'd change a few things ...

A computer is a machine for manipulating data according to a list of instructions. It takes various physical forms. Early electronic computers were the size of a large room, consuming as much power as several hundred personal computers. Today, computers can be made small enough to fit into a wrist watch and can be powered from a watch battery. Society has come to recognize personal computers and their portable equivalent, the laptop computer, as icons of the information age. Most people consider them as computers.

... I'm not an English major though ... this is just what I'd turn it into if it was given to me as an assignment =)

recognise is the right spelling for Australia >>;



Thank you <3

"A computer is a machine for manipulating data according to a list of instructions. It takes various physical forms. Early electronic computers were the size of a large room, consuming as much power as several hundred personal computers. Today, computers can be made small enough to fit into a wrist watch and can be powered from a watch battery. Society has come to recognise personal computers and their portable equivalent, the laptop computer, as icons of the information age; most people consider them as computers. "

is that all?

Well it sounds good :)

I added it and saved my work.


done 23% of my unit which is a good start. I'm now too tired to continue...or well being distracted. hopefully tomorrow I can do the rest of the things where I don't need a supervisor for

yeah it's online so I need a person to oversee that I'm doing the practicals properly, etc and sign off on it.

Going to ask my job agency to help.