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Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:06
by Mikael Hart
Aha, I didn't read it yet, Aeri, so I didn't know. XD
*pets Kori* Okay, done with the movie; now I can get to work! 8D So happy. <3
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:11
by Aerimyth
If either of you wants to read it, here you go:
http://tinyurl.com/245yxp3
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:13
by KoriTamashii
-kneadknead- Hummphhh... To sleep? To vegetate?
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:15
by Mikael Hart
@Kori: You're sleepy? I'm getting sleepy too, but I can't sleep yet. I've been waiting so long for this. X3
@Aeri: I read it; very nice. :)
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:17
by Aerimyth
XD Well... That's better than what the guy I wrote it for said I suppose.
Still trying to figure out where I went wrong. Probably in having written if for a guy in the first place...
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:26
by Mikael Hart
Aha, yeah, uh, I tend not to post lengthy feedback; just not the type of person to do that, I suppose.
But it was sweet of you to write that for someone.
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:34
by Aerimyth
I guess so. I'm not very good at showing emotion, so I think it catches people off guard when I write things like that. Still, "very nice" is a step up from "enlightening".
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:39
by Mikael Hart
I don't think I'd know what to say if someone wrote me that either; especially if it's someone who isn't good at showing emotion. XD
When I get emotional, it gets really purple-prosy corny. *headfloor* That is why I got into writing humor. :X
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:45
by [[Tilla-Vi]]
>3> I'm not sure in which order I'm writing just yet so bare with me. I want to know what you all think of this passage from my book.
My bare feet hit the ground, and I could'nt see where I was going, I just knew that I was going. I din't know how i was going, either. What force it was that was driving me to go, and why. I could feel the heart inside of me beat, and I was reasured by it. Simply said, I was wandering aimlessly where ever i was in this seemingly rough grounded area, then i heard some one call out my name. "Emma," "Hello?" I peeped, "Emma open your eyes." when I mannaged, i couldn't see the voice calling out to me to open my eyes, but the gravity of realizing just how short I was threw me too the ground, physcially I thumped loud enough for anyone near me to have heard the whimper i let out, as i met the ground with distain. I wiggled my toes, and for the first time, giggled at their ocwardness in shape, and sizes. Innocently, i stood back up, and took my first glance at a broken, baren seemingly lifeless land before me.
Miles and miles of land, with what seemed like nothingness for ages . In it i found no beauty, but I found the land that I was in to be honest - It was what it was, and in it's integrety it was true - Baren, full of emptiness and waste. To be awaken to a land so empty and scared seemed irrelevant to me, but for whatever reason it was that I was put here on this bleak uninteresting place for a purpose, i was here one reason or another, or atleast that's how i felt about it. To comprehend that I was all alone(To the best of my knowladge. I'm not really sure how I got here in the first place. or what i am.) was one thing, but to precive that I had nothing to do in this place but become thirsty and hungry and desperate for nurishment, attention and the essentials of life that any primal creature needs tortured me. Circle after circle I walked in constantly looking for something to damper the inward hurricane of pains and aches that called out for the very base needs of life.
Re: ↓ → qυιℓℓ & cαиvαs 【 αи σc нαиgσυт 】 ← ↑
Posted: Apr 22nd, '11, 08:46
by Aerimyth
Haha! Cute. ^_^
My limit on humor would have to be a quip from the book I'm working on.
I went downstairs to find Mom and found her on the sofa munching some
cucumber slices. "Mom, Gaebrien left early this morning, but he left a note
saying he'd check with his parents, and if it was ok with you I could stay
with them tonight. So, can I?"
"Honey, you're eighteen now... You could set your hair on fire and I
couldn't legally stop you. If you want to go you can. Besides, if the rest of
his family is that well mannered, it would be crazy of me not to give it a
chance to rub off on you!" She smiled and I took one of her slices and bit it
in half with a satisfied grin.