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Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Sep 29th, '21, 03:01
by Demonskid
I want someone to fix grammar andspelling mistakes, but everytime I get someone to take a look, they change whole likes and paragraphs. I hate that...

that causes me to lose motivation >A<

I don't take critisism well ._.

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Sep 29th, '21, 20:44
by Moi

>XD
Let me just fix everything u8 -erases-

It depends on the criticism.
If people come off as they're trying to help instead of just pointing out flaws, I can usually handle it better.

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 1st, '21, 19:55
by Demonskid
I once wrote a Gundam Wing fan fiction where Duo Maxwell had an abusive boyfriend and was going through what's called "Spousal Abuse Syndrome"

Someone flammed me for making a 'strong character be weak, that those in service don't go through that' which is BS because I have family that served and ended up in that situation, hense my inspiration for the fanfic.

It's my favorite "flame" xD


Another fanfic I wrote, I had gotten an 'editor' for it. EVERYTHING was rewritten. I dropped that fic fast... didn't get another editor ever again.
Post a paragraph of my story, a friend does the exact same thing that editor did...rewrote the paragraph. A ritual dance turned into a drug spazz..=/ its a fking goblin, that spawns in a dungeon, do they even do drugs?


Talking about that story is making me want to work on it again... just wish I could draw my characters... >A<

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 1st, '21, 20:38
by Moi

Because people who are in the military never suffer any kind of abuse or disabilities 8u
Speaking of the military, I found out my grandpa was a medic in the army.
I was thinking that's what I'd choose to do if I was brave enough to join u8
I don't think he had any issues after serving, though.

>XD
Editors and drugs don't mix u8

What kind of characters are they?

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 2nd, '21, 00:25
by Demonskid
The MC Duven is an elf. Silver Hair (tint of elf hair depends on the season they were born) ((Blue for winter, Green for Spring, Yellow for Summer, I forget fall's tint, probably a light orange...))


Other character is part of MC's group called 'Fluff' because he's a big boy. He's not fat, but not musuclar... just a big boy? xD

So many characters... but those I can think of off thetop of my head.

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 2nd, '21, 01:46
by Moi

That's really interesting for character design 8u

I could offer to sketch some for you some time.
I won't guarantee I'll finish them, but sketches are fast and easy.
It'll have to be after October, though.
Pretty much have this whole month full of making art for Goretober >>

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 2nd, '21, 07:56
by Demonskid
If I ever get back at my pc, I'll send/post pics of the character thingies I made using certain programs. I also have a word press some where with description details... xD

I also wanna make monster/beast art. o3o its a fantasy world with adventurers and beasties!!

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 2nd, '21, 20:45
by Moi

Just make sure you put enough but simple descriptions.
My brain depends on details but I also get confused if there's a lot of them xD;

So it's an RPG u8

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 3rd, '21, 16:58
by Demonskid
no, its a fantasy world.

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Animez-

Posted: Oct 3rd, '21, 20:56
by Moi

But fantasy worlds are RPGs u8<