Kingdom of Knuffel

I think the change in proportion is clearly visible. But we'll agree to disagree.

The main evolving does happen in the skin, wings and horns. I decided to change the clothes that much because it was written that the clothes should evolve, and they come more of as an extra to show off the aging and evolution of the knuffel.
I don't see how 4 gets "loads" of changes. :s the belt is bigger and she has a line around her leg? 5 has two cuts in her dress instead of one. That's about it. The aging might be too fast in the pictures, so that it makes it look like a whole lot of changes. (though it's not really that different expect for the stomach - I had to scale it down because of the tail. The actual size of the head and legs are the same.)

I do agree that the evolving is not very stable though. But idk, a lot of the knuffels change in different rhythms. They suddenly grow a tail, then they grow accessories for 3 stages and in the final they grow ears.

Wren_Fritsche:
Thanks for posting. : )
I really don't want to undermine everyone else's work and say that I shouldn't change it at all. I totally agree with everything you said.

I just find the rules hazy. Currently there's a lot of things that were denied in the message I got:
- Shouldn't change accessory place
- Can't cut her hair
- Has spots in her face that disappear (ie. should change skin color plainly)
- Can't age

and more so from this thread:
- Shouldn't change cloth style
- Should keep the horns as simple horns (I was thinking of "fluffy"-like horns, like it'd first look it's a dragon, but would end up with something slightly different)

( I also added the other wing to bring some 'extra', so that it would be different from the previous stage. Admittedly that can look a bit silly and would be probably better with two of them growing. )

Even if I were to change her, I'd have to basically... remove everything that there is? If I had known in the beginning that she can't cut her hair, or age like Grimalkin does, or the accessory needs to be in the same place, I wouldn't have used 1-2 months of thinking time in vain.

( I'll reply to Firn in the next post. )

Firn wrote:I am sorry I wasn't able to explain it well enough. I will try it again.

I'm sorry if I'm making a scene out of this. : ) Not really my intention, I do understand what everyone is explaining and I'm totally fine with your reasons for rejecting it.

This alone would probably not have been a reason to reject the Knuffel, but since I had to reject it for other reasons anyways, I thought I would list it so you could improve that Knuffel.

oh! I see. I thought it was forbidden.
They are actually the same size, but... the tail screws things up http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd12 ... mesize.jpg - - If I get the time to change the knuffel, I'll do something about it. Thank you for the feedback. : )

Adding clothes, and then taking them off again or relocating them is no evolution and does not count as any change at all!

I read that as not being forbidden, just that it doesn't count towards the three changes, and added them as an extra. :s Could you change the wording to say that it is forbidden to do so? Same for cutting the clothes/hair. I didn't think it would be wrong, because, well, it's the same cloth/hair. It only reads that the knuffel can't change the clothes completely.

I think you probably rather meant for the spots to become more till they completely become the dark skin, so that might have been my mistake.

Yes. :') It is badly executed then.

With the skin I was thinking that it would first go to the other spectrum, ie. from light to dark, and then slowly find it's perfect place from closer the center. Kinda like there's constant fluctuation with the colors, until it becomes just perfect. Is this forbidden, or would it be allowed if it was more clear what was happening?

I hope you do improve the Knuffel and re-submit it, because the art is gorgeous.

Thank you. And I'm sorry for being a pain in the ass.

Onis wrote:

This alone would probably not have been a reason to reject the Knuffel, but since I had to reject it for other reasons anyways, I thought I would list it so you could improve that Knuffel.

oh! I see. I thought it was forbidden.
They are actually the same size, but... the tail screws things up http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd12 ... mesize.jpg - - If I get the time to change the knuffel, I'll do something about it. Thank you for the feedback. : )

You could try having the tail curl like you did in the fifth stage, it would fit and then you can keep it the same size.

Onis wrote:

I think you probably rather meant for the spots to become more till they completely become the dark skin, so that might have been my mistake.

Yes. :') It is badly executed then.

I would suggest that in each stage, you make the spots slightly bigger, but also lighten the shade as they get bigger until the spots basically cover her and are almost the same color as what you want for the final stage. That might portray it better.

ml1201: Thanks. : ) I'll do that!

And I'll return... some day... when I'm done (again), for feedback. XD Don't hold your breathe, I'm very slow. Thanks again for everyone taking the time to reply to me and have a good niiight~ (*runs off to the night*)

Hey,

So I just finished my first Knuffel, and befor I get rejected for it, can someone please tell me how to fix the problem that the last two stages are not really in the middle of the space...

I really dont have an Idea how to fix that
thank you

I used firns base, but I added a tail and it was just rather close to the upper end.

I found the tool, now I feel rather stupid
thank you