Kingdom of Knuffel

Like is there any commentary you'd make on the writing? Concerns? Things you like? A style you were aiming for? Etc?

Hm, maybe I'll think about doing someone I haven't in a while or an still developing, though that might not work ne.

Awe, it's late here. I want to stay up, but I won't be able to get up for finals if I do. XP

Huh, well, I remember not knowing where to start when I wrote it, and not knowing how it would go. I always have this incessant notion that I'm going to fail before I start writing, so I have to find an, er, optimal hour/mood to begin.

I always want to picture what I write, of course; find purpose for all the sentences (they should all contribute to the RP, and not be added on like a babble). I read as I write so I can hear the story's flow; I don't want it to end up sounding monotonous or chalky. I want my readers to be able to understand the tone of the story, to visualize my words, and be able to empathize with the character.

I have a bad habit of stating things, when what I really should do is show through description. I think I accomplished that in that RP post. I also find it very awkward to constantly describe my character's appearance when I begin an RP.

I remember liking the seat cushion bit, though; it's like me to throw something like that into the story, and I had to word it just so it wasn't too "ha-ha" funny (because that would totally mess up the tone.) I just want enough to something to be able to laugh at on the inside, because life is like that; even when things are messed up, there's still something to laugh at (as a reader at least... probably not for the character himself at present.)

I always have to keep notes on what's going on as I write. Is my character sitting or standing? Is he holding something, wearing something significant? How's the weather, what time of day is it? I want to make sure my writing remains consistent.

Off to bed then? :) Have a good one.

Wow, that's quite a bit (of FPs).

It works because I only go there once a month. XD;

I do use that emote too much.

I can't LS with you now, though; I'm still working on that darn post. I keep writing about irrelevant things. DX

Aha, I feel like this post I'm writing sucks, but I don't have the ability to make anything better right now. *headfloor and rolls in pain*

Whaaat? Dude, I'm sorry if I gave you that impression --I'm really not. XD

Actually, the floor is dirty. It's just making me dirty as well. XP