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Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 3rd, '13, 21:56
by Plushie Heartless
Gonna start calling you a luddite, Dark.

It's so obvious that they're working for something else and took too long to reveal the survivors that it's made me grumpy and the characters seem kinda slow. (Even though they have good reason to cling to their perceptions, really) Especially with the super fake "Sally"... People call this fast paced in reviews...?

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 3rd, '13, 21:59
by Blaise Aurel
what's a luddite?

And yeah. I feel like the story could have had potential, but it was done all wrong. And so it just...wasn't that good.

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 3rd, '13, 22:37
by Plushie Heartless
XD;; Yeah. It wasn't... totally bad...
I think the voice over infodump kind of killed a lot.

Hmm... how would the people in your world think of it and how do they name things? History of the area...

Like how in there're a lot of names based on Native American words/descriptions, mispronounced and passed through accents like a game of telephone to get to their current state. (...of Mississippi, for starters.)

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 3rd, '13, 22:52
by Sinni
I don't feel like putting clothes on.

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 3rd, '13, 22:59
by Lestrade
Is there any reason you have to? Heh.

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 4th, '13, 01:26
by Lady Tatsuhiko
UUUUUUUUGH screw all these damn hoops I gotta go through to complete my school aid
Apparently the IRS doesn't have my updated address dur hur hur
so I need that in before I can even get a IRS tax return transcript
in order to send that off to school because it needs that
and they stopped allowing direct copies of your tax return
this damn semester, augh!!!!!!!!!!!

so even though I brought my tax return they're not allowed to use it
so now I have to do as this bullshit

AND and can't use the IRS data retrieval tool on my FAFSA
because of no real reason in particular, they just want to give me hell

At least I picked up my books and pre-ordered Pokemon X

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 4th, '13, 04:23
by flyfari
Ugh that sucks Konan :(

but yaay pokemon x! and also a new water knuffel now, this one looks pretty cute haha

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 4th, '13, 04:29
by Blaise Aurel
That's not a bad idea, Tea. Unfortunately, I haven't been building the world in that order heh. It's for Pathfinder, and I made a map for the known continents (there's an area off to the side where nobody's ever been able to sail too, so I can play with that later).

I do plan on having a town of desert dwelling people, maybe the desert can be named after them (at least, to the people outside the desert. They might have a different name for it)

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 4th, '13, 04:37
by Sinni
i wonder how this one is going to turn out. he looks cute

Re: Masquerade: The Immigration

Posted: Sep 4th, '13, 04:42
by Plushie Heartless
Oh man, Konan... D:

I... bought the cream furry wig, because it's my favorite. *confetti*

...
YAY YAY new Knuffel! FINALLY!



@Dark - See, there you go - what the people in the area call it, and whether or not travellers use the same name...