Kingdom of Knuffel

l-lappy wrote:Oh, I didn't know that > n <
Thats kinda sad that was added .___.'

Ah well he will just get rejected again.

unless the background/floor relates to the knuffel, like the mushroom one, I think that's what I read last?!

Please don't give up with it though, also you could have done the very first state almost bare, like just underwear.. that short of helps to shift more items to the other states.

he is so cuuute

a Magpie Lappy? ^-^''
i hope you fix him up, and i'm not sure about the "grass" on his feet .

I got rejected twice for my first creation. Aww...I thought I figured out what was wrong, but I guess...I was wrong. XD

This is what I submitted.

I'm guessing that the first and second stage look too similar? The first time it was rejected, I thought it was the third to fourth...*sigh*

Any suggestions on what to change? Maybe I should take out the wings from the first stage.

Hello! It seems that I need help, because I got a reject and I can't understand where is the problem, but I really don't want to renounce because this Knuffel took me weeks, so... here I'm! The rejection message said:

"At least one of the stages is too similar to the previous / next. The Knuffel should evolve more noticably."

Only I don't know which stage is the problem, so... any help?

Here are the 5 stages:

SPOILER


And this is a list of the changes for each stage, in "(...)" are the very little changes:

To 2nd stage:
more hair
more leaves on the body
skin tone
first cortex on feet and legs
(lips form)

To 3rd stage:
more hair
(first butterflies)
eyes color
skin tone
(lips form)
makeup
more cortex

To 4th stage:
butterflies are more clear
makeup color
lips color
more cortex
skin tone
more hair

To 5th stage:
skin tone
tear
more butterflies
more hair
trunk
leaves on the ground



Thank you for your help!



EDIT: I have a question for another Knuffel idea that I have: draw it naked would be against this rule?

→ Your Knuffel should not contain explicit sexual content, which should already be pretty clear from Kingdom Of Knuffel's rules.

Firn wrote:

l-lappy wrote:But out of curiosity what was the copyrighted material / designs?
o.O;

A mistake, selected the wrong text from my list.
But I wrote you an extra message that explained the real reasons.

Phew~that’s good~
Because I don't look at anything when I make a knuffel,
So I wouldn't even know where to begin if I had subconsciously copied something.


I re-read everything,
My bad I haven’t been active much over the past month,
Feel quite angry at myself for not noticing myself.
> ____ <;

Defiantly always going to get a second option in future,
Before I submit a knuffel, to avoid problems.
c:

@Flash
Yush~ for Merrymaking and her love of magpies.
Been quite a challenge to think of a design that hasn't been done.

There been some amazing magpie knuffels already!



Okays~
here where I am at now;
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/ ... /Sand1.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/ ... /Sand2.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/ ... /sand3.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/ ... /sand4.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/ ... /sand5.png


Am I getting on the right path now with the clothes? x.x;
(Sorry I had to add a small top to the first stage,
I couldn't stand seeing him so bare > _ <;)

Hope im going in the right direction now~

I'm play with him some more tomorrow...
after a good sleep and with a fresh head.

I love the white addition in his hair. x3