He turned out well. :) I never got to see you finish drawing him because my internet disconnected when I was watching. :(
I may have been the one who didn't like his eyes. I remember thinking that he looked cross-eyed or something. I think it could be because of the white highlights being on opposite sides. I also don't really like how thin the outlines are for the eyes compared to everything else, though it's less obvious in his last stage. Don't really like the long bit of hair between the eyes either.
Please don't be offended.
No problem with the links here.