Kingdom of Knuffel

Which ever one you want. :mccute:

OH okay. Yeah I'm just working on this new one at the moment.

By the way....I clicked that link in your sig next to the butterfly....it didn't work.

I've been meaning to take it out, that site died the hard way. Not enough people joining it and the owner got fed up of trying to keep it running. So she shut it down. :mcsad:

That's too bad! What kind of site was it?

So my Knuffel got rejected yet again, even after a bunch of changes. Any more suggestions?

[1] [2] [3] [4] [5]

Most of her changes do not meet those rules (in my opinion):

→ Striking, clearly visible major changes per stage
→ At least 3 changes per stage, if they are minor things, like "adding gloves" etc, there should be MORE changes per stage.

Especially 3-4, they seem the same for me at first sight.
1-2 can be easily changed by making her top simplier in first stage.
You can also mess up more with her hair and eyes. Make them regular human eyes in brown or blue, but change into green dragon eyes later. 4th stage could have small wings, since wings you give her in final stage are rather complex.

Amalath.. I said the same mostly.

Here's what I told her:

First to second: Only two small changes. You need atleast 3 major changes.
For what I suggest, make the top evolve a tad more, same goes for the pants. I also would try actually to let the pony tail OFF. and add it at the second.
Second to third: The scales are already one big improvenment. Also the ears seem to be easy to spot. I suggest for this stage, I should make the top a tad darker. Colors can be quite a difference too.
Third to fourth: Change the top more, the horns are alright. Make SOMETHING happen to the bottom. Give her bracelets or such at her feet.
Fourth to Final: Give her TINY wings in the fourth one so it makes sense where they come from. I mean, I don't even know where they suddenly came from. Sure, the final may be a blast but it can also be a bit logical. Next to that, the fourth and final should be updated with the changes you make in the previous ones but I hope that was already logical.

I also suggest trying to clear the colors that fall out of the lines. Its another reason to reject because it isn't clean.

I hope I might be of some help.

Yeah, just letting her know issue is still around the same things *shrugs*

She could also use a tail. Something that would add to bottom parts and give a bigger element that's noticable right away.

Hello there~
at first my english isn't very good ^^°

I created a wild knuffel but he was rejected. The reasons were:
- Artistic standards
- Clear Cut
- Evolution /enough changes.

I think I solved the clear cut problem. But I don't really know what the problem is with artistic standards? Maybe because his skin and hair is white? I've created him so, I don't really want to change this.
And maybe someone help with the changes? I changed 3 things per stage but maybe the changes are too small?

Thanks ^^

Stage 1: http://i1010.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... stufe1.png
Stage 2: http://i1010.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... stufe2.png
Stage 3: http://i1010.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... stufe3.png
Stage 4: http://i1010.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... stufe4.png
Stage 5: http://i1010.photobucket.com/albums/af2 ... stufe5.png

Changes are definitely too small. For example, 1 to 2 the only really noticeable thing is the pink in his hair and that's it. Even comparing 1 and 4, the changes are very little. Horns, hair, tail...

You need to make sure that the changes are obvious because anything too small won't be accepted. :)

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