Hey Starkad. I've been reading through the Story tab and found these errors:
Nympharia is the shop owner of the Kingdom's Treasure Trove, which is located at the shore. She rarely leaves her water home and seldom interacts with other inhabitants that don’t live in the ocean. But whenever she meets other residents of the Kingdom she is always kind and polite. Nympharia spends most of her free time with singing, pearl-diving, playing with her dolphin friends or simply combing her hair for hours.
It sounds better if you just remove the "with."
Lyera is the hairdresser and owner of the Kingdom's hairdresser's shop, The Cutting Crew. She is of middle age and of calm and responsible character which is why, on behalf of the Queen, she is spending some of her free time secretly keeping an eye on Walla, which is why she can often be found sneaking behind Walla and her friends, never short of an excuse when caught
It's also better if you end the sentence with "Walla"
Then, you Can add this next sentence: "That explains why she can often be found sneaking behind Walla and her friends, never short of an excuse when caught."
Or
"That is why she can often be found sneaking behind Walla and her friends, never short of an excuse when caught"
Lucretia, Peppe, Walla and Gigi are connected by an inseparable bond of friendship, and despite the great differences in personalities they are rarely seen apart. Lucretia is the shop keeper of Lunatic Fringe, while the seemingly always cheerful Gigi runs Purikura. She is secretly in love with Peppe, the owner of the Kingdom's trading center, The Vault. Together with Walla, the King's and Queen's daughter, they are always full of mischief and open for any kind of reckless adventure.
"King's and Queen's" should be replaced with King and Queen's
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Actually, if it's okay with you guys, I could rewrite the whole story page while trying to retain it's current state (ie. changing as little amount of words as possible)
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