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Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 20th, '10, 15:08
by Eruvandir
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .
8/10
. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.
. . . wings . . .mayisa wrote:9/10
better border!
uuhmm.. but what? >__> i don't have any of this colour sheme.. i have the same background like you
you think this'd match?
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .
It matches better =)
. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.
. . . wings . . .
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 20th, '10, 17:10
by mayisa
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 07:58
by Madame Kitsune
9/10
Really cute. ^^
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 11:16
by movingenergie
7/10
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 11:36
by Meta
6/10
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 14:48
by Amura
9/10
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 15:50
by mayisa
9.5/10
its lovely but i'd take something different in your hand..
@ madame kitsune: thank youse!
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 16:00
by Amura
9.5/10
Oh, I've just changed it and it needs to be adjusted a lot.
I wanted a bit of color in the hand item, but I'm not sure yet if I like it or not...
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 18:43
by Madame Kitsune
8/10
It's a lovely idea. ^^ I can see why you chose the sakura item to hold as it matches the orion eyes, however I think it would look better with something yellow/gold, to match the necklace, or swap the necklace for something lilac. ^^
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 21st, '10, 20:56
by Meta
7/10