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Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 21st, '10, 21:38
by Amura
8.5/10

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 22nd, '10, 16:10
by Eruvandir
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .


9/10 . . . I love it!



. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.

. . . wings . . .

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 23rd, '10, 09:24
by movingenergie
6/10
Missing something

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 23rd, '10, 09:33
by Eruvandir
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .


8.5/10

. . . I think it's because of the background (?)



. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.

. . . wings . . .

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 23rd, '10, 13:29
by featherquill
9/10 ^^

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 24th, '10, 01:17
by Keres
10/10

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 24th, '10, 03:10
by featherquill
1o/1o ^^

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 24th, '10, 06:59
by Eruvandir
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .


10/10



. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.

. . . wings . . .

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 24th, '10, 07:20
by Keres
9.9/10

Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread

Posted: May 24th, '10, 08:09
by Amura
9.5/10