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Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 24th, '10, 10:38
by Eruvandir
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .
9.8/10
. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.
. . . wings . . .
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 24th, '10, 14:15
by featherquill
9/10 I think maybe do a background ^^;
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 24th, '10, 14:18
by Eruvandir
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .
Okay =)
10/10
. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.
. . . wings . . .
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 24th, '10, 17:41
by Zalsia
8/10
maybe add a red item to match the eyes? 
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 24th, '10, 21:43
by VampMiyu
7/10
Maybe add a frame and something in the neck area?
I really like the colour match though,and the composition is looking good,but it feels like its missing something
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 25th, '10, 03:49
by Eruvandir
Near the gate inside the harbor,
he told me he'd give me his wings . . .
8/10
Maybe add a frame too . . .
. . . And near the castle, he said no word
as loneliness to me he brings.
. . . wings . . .
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 25th, '10, 05:10
by Keres
Add some more black stuff~
8/10
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 25th, '10, 05:31
by featherquill
10/10 I really can't think of anything to do to that one O.o I love the colors...
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 25th, '10, 09:11
by movingenergie
10/10
Re: The First Rate the Avatar above you Thread
Posted: May 25th, '10, 09:43
by featherquill
9/10 I think the green is abit much, either that, or find a way to make the green and blue mix well together ^^