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Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:15
by LeannaAnne
I'll try to catch some too, taking a break from hatching caterpie's >.>;;

Ey demon, what is your native language?

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:17
by Demonskid
english xD

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:21
by LeannaAnne
Could i ask you a little favor? You may ask for a favor in return <3

I have written a summary and an personal motivation/opinion on a random article. But it has to be correct and decent english >.< Could you give me some feedback? :qc:

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:23
by Demonskid
eheheheh ^^, I would if I had gotten good grades in class.

A lot of american schools suck, especially for the poor kids. My grammar and spelling are terrible, you sure you want me to look at it? =( I don't want you getting a bad grade because of me ><

-barely passed her GED Test because of her grammar-

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:27
by LeannaAnne
Well its feedback right? ;) I know how decent english sounds... but i'm by far able to make up some decent english XD

I already checked the first one with my father (wich is an english book maniac = english pro). Do you see that typo in the second line of this parapgraph, i really have to punch the 'h' in such words.... xD

I hope that reading the first one will help you understand the second one, they are both about 250 words <3
Spoiler
In the article from Micheal B. Farrell “Two startups in high-tech bike race” he tells that within a few weeks from each other, two startups announced their hybrid e-wheel. Strikingly similar, they both feature motorized wheels that connect to your smartphone. Both startups try to convince the target group to get their product.

Both wheels have their technology attached to the rear wheel in a disc. They will help in a situation like cycling uphill. In the opposite direction they can store captured energy when going downhill. However, there are technical differences between the two wheels but the concepts are clearly identical.

The first startup is the Copenhagen Wheel by Assan Biderman from Superpedestrian. He started in 2009 in Cambridge in the SENSEable City Lab. The second startup is the FlyKly by Niko Klansek and was announced on Kickstarter October 2013 for crowdfunding. Niko Klansek is the founder of Flykly Inc. which used to produce electric bikes.

Biderman is suspicious because Klansek visited SENSEable City Lab where the Copenhagen Wheel was being developed. But according to Klansek the main concept was an old idea which he has been working on for some years. In his vision the Copenhagen Wheel prototype was forgotten due to lack of progress over time.

Neither of the entrepreneurs have enough money to go to court to settle the ownership of the concept. The FlyKly wheel is priced 590 dollar and the Copenhagen Wheel is 699 dollar and that makes them unattractive to simple cyclist. They now await the release of their product to see if they sell at all.
Spoiler
I did choose this text because of the competition in technology. One thing that I love about my education is that you are always searching for something new. Instead of reading an article about the well-known Google Glass I am reading about new technology that might help me in a future project.

I like the concept of a gadget for your bicycle to calculate all kind of data. It is quite clever to combine all the unique gadgets in one disc. I am more concerned about the use of a smartphone. In the article they say the disc will help in difficult situations. However, do I want to grab my smartphone when I am in a difficult situation?

If I had to choose a side I would choose for the Copenhagen Wheel. The whole situation that Klansek visited Superpedestrian’s project probably leads to gain a benefit out of their progress. According to his statements its obvious that he appealed at Kickstarter because he assumed that the Copenhagen Wheel wouldn’t make it. Klansek could make use of his devotion to electric bikes as a cloak for the project. Although I am also just a student with limited money in my pockets and then the FlyKly would be cheaper.

In the end they are both in an endeavour for the best product. According to Biderman someone cannot just copy a progress of years in a short time. What really matters now is the unique selling points they can develop into their products.

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:31
by Demonskid
I didn't even understand half the words you used xD

I didn't see any mistakes.

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:51
by LeannaAnne
Hihi thank you <3 Well yeah same here... one of the goals of this class is to 'expand your vocabulary.' So if you find any difficult word you're supposed to translate it. They even forced me to use 8 words in the second part, like....myeah... i'm never going to use these words again xD

In an continuous endeavor i will get myself a Shiny Caterpie! *shot*

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:52
by Demonskid
And i will.. eventually get this Ditto to stay in a pokeball! xD its being stubborn

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:55
by LeannaAnne
I went on a shopping spree for pokeballs to gain style... now i wonder what to do with all the premier balls XD i got a few quick balls along the buying because i knew i would use them anyhow XD

I should go to the hotel....i need money XD

Re: Official Thread Killer Hangout -Chat & Hangout-

Posted: Jun 29th, '14, 21:57
by Demonskid
yea i'm using the 800+pokeballs i got from the style binge i went on ages ago xD

I just go to the Battle Mansion near the daycare when I need money, I make over 100,000 each hour >x<