Just a couple errors not yet pointed out.
Feänor wrote: is the shop keeper of The Family Jewels on in the Kingdom Of Knuffel. He comes from an ancient family of noble Dark Elves and is several hundretd years of age. He loves nature and lives in a tree house with his pet, the hamster Ulric.
Fungus wrote:
Race: S’hroom
Fungus is the shop keeper of Kingdom Of Knuffe’s first shop, Bananarama. He belongs to a rare species called S'hrooms, which, besides their visual resemblance of a mushroom, is marked by small size. Because of this size Fungus gets often confused with a child. He has a crush on Lucretia, but because of low self-esteem and his shyness he has never dared to talk to her.
Nympharia wrote:
Race: Merfolk
Nympharia is the shop owner of the Kindom's Treasure Trove, which is located at the shore. She rarely leaves her water home and seldom interacts with other inhabitants that don’t live in the ocean. But whenever she meets other residents of the Kingdom she is always kind and polite. Nympharia spends most of her free time with singing, pearl-diving, playing with her dolphin friends or simply combing her hair for hours.
Also, shouldn't it be '...live in the ocean, but whenever...' I thought in English it was improper to start a sentence with 'but'
Lyera wrote:
Race: Human
Lyera is the hairdresser and owner of the Kingdom's hairdresser's shop The Cutting Crew. She is of middle age and of calm and responsible characher character which is why, on behalf of the Queen, she is spending some of her free time secretly keeping an eye on Walla, which is why she cann often be found sneaking behind Walla and her friends, never short of an excuse when caught.