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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 16:23
by Luluannabell
I don't really like too cluttered knuffel so I try to keep it minimal :qhehe:
do you think those are enough changes now, anyway? D:

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 16:29
by ml1201
Yes, it does look better. "mchappy"

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 16:31
by Luluannabell
Okay... then I'll just submit it again, and hope for the best, I guess.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 17:19
by EllyAngelYukizato
Yay! I helped! \o/ ^^

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 18:25
by Luluannabell
It was rejected .__.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 18:49
by amalath
Lulu, how about something like this? I added small change to design and switched some stuff: http://i.imgur.com/JsoWH.png

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 18:57
by Luluannabell
ama, take another look at 2 and three. clothes change a lot while otherwise only the hair changes and a bit of eyeshadow+ lipstick you can hardly see if you look at it in a smaller view, are you sure that's how you meant it? .__. since I don't count the makeup stuff as a change it seems too little to me.
out of curiousness, di you use the second version? as I posted three already .__.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 18:59
by Firn
The problem with your Knuffel is that it is not evolving. Somewhere in the middle it gets a few new things, but from then on, the things are just getting larger, but nothing new happens with your Knuffel. Basically it is not evolving from something to something, all it does is growing which is nice, but not the concept of Knuffel.

I hope I was able to explain that in a way that was understandable.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 19:04
by Luluannabell
:mcblush: I didn't know it was the evolution thing, since the PM only said similarities between stages, and that's what I thought it was.... not the evolution in itself :mcblush:
sorry, I'll work on a different version >.<

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Aug 31st, '12, 19:05
by amalath
Lulu> in edit that I posted:
1-2: top, pants, hair
2-3: pants+falbain, hair, top changes

You don't have to count all outfit changes as 1 change O.o Maybe if you'd add changes only to pants like: longer pants and small design at them it could be one, but with what you post top and pants are two different changes as long as change's big enough to count as evolution... and i moved head elements and wings to 4 and 5 to fit what Firn posted about. Though I think last stage back elements could be bigger, they're hardly visable because their color mixes with outfit color.