xD i just hope it turns out well. if you want i can try to pm you the first bit of it o: like the prologue

I think it will! Especially if you spend a lot of time on it (not necessarily writing but you know, thinking about it). Stories are the best when made with love (like cooking! XD)

Really? :O Yesh please!

Honestly I hadn't even thought about it for a while, but just recently I started thinking about it again.

Sent it to you :3

Heh I think that happens a lot when you try to write and do everything else at the same time (job, homework, blah :P) At least it does for me >>'''

The prologue's really good! I like your brief details and the emotions are expressed very well too. Now I just want to know about this danger thing! Is that a slightly veiled excuse to add more supernaturals to the story? :D Also, can I order one of him online somewhere? XD

i want one of him too ><; trust me. well it's a mixture, i haven't decided completely if maybe demons will come after her because he's around her, but the suspense part will come with that <<;

well things got a bit heated in the 2nd chapter at the end xD matched with a makeout session xD

lol XD Death Match! Winner gets non-existent male! :D

That is a toughie, but it sounds good! I was thinking of either demons or God being all "You saw an angel?!" *smite* >> I only like the latter choice because it has smiting *fails* I see why you're having trouble with the middle. Lots of choices.

All sappy novels have a makeout session! So I approve! *stamps seal of approval* ...do I get a preview of that one too later? XD Now I'm like one of those demanding manga leechers. "New chapter nao! Or I interwebs smite u! D:<" Haha

xD i have chapter 1 & 2 done xD but i just feel like i rushed the makeout scene <<;

hrm that could be interesting to have her smited, but i want her with him in the end, not God kicking her out of heaven for seeing the guy xD

Yeah rushing isn't always a good thing. But I can see why XD At least you have something written for it, so that should make fixing it later easier.

lol Well there could be a intention to smite and then she doesn't get smited because she helps out God somehow with the demons or something. But yeah smiting would leave you with a non-happy sappy ending :O

well i was almost thinking the demons got her and then the angel gets super pissed so he kills all the demons, then god thanks him by making her an angel too <<

Awww I like that ending! Where she ends up being an angel T^T Definitely a sappy ending for sure. Is the thankful part about God being happy that the angel saved a human or killed lots of demons? That part's kind of iffy for me since she's not his daughter? Right? Oh! Or is there a plot twist of her being a daughter :O (sorry over active imagination. I blame movies and books and MLPs!)