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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:14    


mercu

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well it sounds a little weird but aren't philosophical books supposed to sound kinda weird? :mclaugh:

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underneath it all, we're just savages
hidden behind shirts, ties and marriages


i'm not afraid of god
i am afraid of man


you can keep the last of me
i don't care, i am obsolete
you have seen the last of me
wring my neck, i won't feel a thing


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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:20    


Hibari97

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Why does it sound a bit weird? o,o

And nahh.. in German there are more possibilities to work with words.. e.g. there is one word in English, "gentle", like I realized with translating the next sentences, but there are many different words in German to create different atmospheres.. "sanft" and "sacht" ..it's both gentle in English Q-Q
And I can juggle a bit. And in the first chapter are many metaphors, inversions, epiphers, anaphers and alliterations.. u-u which you wouldn't see if you translate the text.. that's a pity..

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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:23    


mercu

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ah i see.
see, all of what you just said, that's probably why it sounds a little weird in english. xD

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underneath it all, we're just savages
hidden behind shirts, ties and marriages


i'm not afraid of god
i am afraid of man


you can keep the last of me
i don't care, i am obsolete
you have seen the last of me
wring my neck, i won't feel a thing


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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:27    


Hibari97

Joined: Oct 28th, '11, 19:58
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Yeah maybe u__u But my German teacher said it's good xD (at least in German)
He's one of the judges at our literature contest at school o3o so I believe it's catchy if he says so xD

Mehh.. may I ask if someone has a pair of Good or Evil Eyes he/she doesn't need? xD

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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:33    


mercu

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is the book for that contest?

don't have a spare pair, sorry.
although i'm considering selling mine anyway... i don't even use them so. o3o

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underneath it all, we're just savages
hidden behind shirts, ties and marriages


i'm not afraid of god
i am afraid of man


you can keep the last of me
i don't care, i am obsolete
you have seen the last of me
wring my neck, i won't feel a thing


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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:39    


Hibari97

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I took a little part of the book.. because only 1500 words were allowed ^^°

Why keeping something you don't even use? xDD
I try to get rid of those things, cause I'm always almost broke xD and the prices on KofK are rising month by month.. ... ._.

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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:41    


mercu

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did you win? o:

because i'm a hoarder.
or i used to be.
although the virgo hair auctions sort of forced me to clean out some of my wardrobe lol.
plus i don't know if and how they are going to be remade. o:
i'm cautious about getting rid of items before they are remade bc what if i sell them and then it turns out that i like the remade version a lot? xD

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underneath it all, we're just savages
hidden behind shirts, ties and marriages


i'm not afraid of god
i am afraid of man


you can keep the last of me
i don't care, i am obsolete
you have seen the last of me
wring my neck, i won't feel a thing


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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:48    


Hibari97

Joined: Oct 28th, '11, 19:58
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Location: Germany ♥
The result will be announced at the last day before holidays :3 on the 16th of June ^^°

Oh gosh I hope they're not going to remake them >__> I didn't like the oiran set after the remake.. because the eyes looked so inanimate.. and that's why I liked them..Most of the stuff that was remade is not really attracting me..

Yeah.. that would be a bit.. unfortunate xD

I have so much stuff I want to trade >-< But I can't find someone I could trade with..

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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:52    


mercu

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ahhh i see i see. o:
good luck!

i like most of the remakes. >u>
well the buying and selling forums tend to be kinda slow. *shrug*
someone will come along eventually. o:

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underneath it all, we're just savages
hidden behind shirts, ties and marriages


i'm not afraid of god
i am afraid of man


you can keep the last of me
i don't care, i am obsolete
you have seen the last of me
wring my neck, i won't feel a thing


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 Post subject: Re: The Frosty Castle
Posted: Jun 2nd, '13, 11:55    


Hibari97

Joined: Oct 28th, '11, 19:58
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Mood: I hate everything ~ Fairy: 24.07.2013/20.01.2015
Location: Germany ♥
Thank you ^u^

If you know someone who needs some virgo, white knight, snow white, pterippus items.. and maybe some others then tell me please xD

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