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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 19:14
by MayChan09
Chich wrote:Oof. Worst possible thing happened. So now I have the question: What is wrong with the "concept of evolultion"?

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I'm really sad because they're a pair and now they've been separated ; -;
@Cich: I'm sooo sorry but I don't understand what you meant ^^" english isn't my mother tongue so sometimes it's hard for me to understand the meaning :mcblush:

@amalath: Kay, then I'll try it "mchappy"

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 19:18
by Chich
Oh, I was just directly quoting the message. Apparently there's something undesirable about the way his evolution is progressing. I'm not sure what it is?

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 19:36
by amalath
From what I noticed: your first guy is more constant with adding stuff. There is not much evolution in clothes, but his hair, beard and skin nicely catches up for it. From stage to stage beard is growing visibly longer, hair getting longer and puffier, etc.

Now with the rejected one there is lot of reductions: you add chest and body hair to second stage but take them away totally in third which isn't evolution, beard starts short, grows in second stage, then gets reduced in third, just to grow again in fifth. Again, doesn't count as evolution.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 19:38
by Chich
The body hair is transitioning to a layer of fur. I was told it was clear that that was happening. It happens with Aldan, as well.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 19:42
by amalath
3-4 maybe, but between 2-3? I don't see fur there .^.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 19:44
by Chich
That's what the color change is. It's why the blushing parts are gone. The transition is he's getting hairier, as in, it just becomes fur. But, since it's apparently not clear enough, what would you suggest to make it clearer?

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:00
by amalath
Well, right now it just looks like if beard and chest and body hair from second stage disappear and his chest getting darker again in 4th stage is only making this feeling stronger. It's dark chest-light chest-dark chest. I mean... why making hair/fur lighter in 3rd if they're dark again in 4th? He needs bit better way of changing between 2-3-4 imo. Your first boy avoids that effect because beard grows constantly bigger and he gets this cool, fluffy chest hair in stage three.
If it's possible, I'd suggest trying to go for similar effect as first one has. Maybe starting with no beard in first, then 2nd stage getting short first stage's beard and chest hair. Third: getting body hair and even darker chest + the changes it has now ofc. That way you'd avoid 3rd stage looking so off between 2 and 4.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:09
by Chich
I'm not going to change the flow of body hair -> fur -> patterned fur because it flows synchronously with Aldan. I'll make some changes and show them to you to see if they work, okay?

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:14
by amalath
Sure thing.

Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?

Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:28
by Chich
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I made his body hair lighter in 2, and added slight coloration to the fur in 3.