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Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:31
by MayChan09
@Cich: Ahh okay now I understand!
Soo now I finished adding the wings.
I made 2 different versions of wings for stage 5. "mchappy"
What do you think about it?
Nr. 1
Nr. 2
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:36
by amalath
Chich> It does look better to me. Can't tell you 100% if it's enough for Firn or not, but it's worth a shot I guess.
May> since the wings are quite big, I think it would be nice to add small ones in stage 4 as well, to add more to evolution. Anyway, colour wise version 1 looks better I think .
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:39
by witch77
MayChan09 wrote:@Cich: Ahh okay now I understand!
Soo now I finished adding the wings.
I made 2 different versions of wings for stage 5. "mchappy"
What do you think about it?
Nr. 1
Nr. 2
nr 2 looks very nice, but i'm afraid Firn is not accepting knuffels with any kind of glow...
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 20:49
by Chich
Okay, I resubmitted it. Thank you for the help, amalath. ;=;
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 24th, '13, 21:03
by MayChan09
@amalath: Thanks!
@witch77: That's why I made 2 versions xD I wasn't sure about the glow, although I'd prefer it
Already added small wings and changed the colour a bit in
4. stage
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 25th, '13, 09:09
by Sunlight
Cute. Her right arm seems so empty, though. I want something there.
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 25th, '13, 20:16
by Chich
So big freakin surprise, Firn still thinks it's wrong. Wish I could just freakin explain what's happening.
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 25th, '13, 20:52
by Plushie Heartless
Aw, Chich, you know it shouldn't need an explanation. :<
Just make a few more changes, and he'll be fine...
His fur just needs to be more obviously fur...
(I still think his hair should be more between brown
& the pale blonde, too, but-)
(Coming in here to talk.)
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 25th, '13, 21:25
by jacobgrey
To me personally, the colour change makes it look like two completely different people. I can't see the evolution because it's more of an absolute change from one to the other which doesn't make sense when viewing it. I would give a more gradual colour change, so that you can see it is clearly the same person. Either you can have the colour "flowing" through the hair, so you start with a little blond spot which grows through as the fur comes in, or a more gradual change like you have with Aldan going from brown to red.
Re: Why was my Wild Knuffel rejected?
Posted: Sep 25th, '13, 22:22
by MayChan09
The last changes were only small ones, as it was mentioned that the right arm looks empty I added a sleeve. (didn't know what to do instead
still looks a little bit empty.. -.-")
I also put pockets onto her pants. ( I forgot to do this all the time,
)
Chloé
