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Re: My attempt(s) on short poetry, huuuuur

Posted: Mar 15th, '12, 07:41
by Lag
o3o Cool. Short, but cool. Now I wanna make a story out of it. >U Stupid writer tendencies...

The ripples in the water
The still red-stained water
Show their reflections
Of sadness and terror


Aiyah...what am I doing. OTL

Re: My attempt(s) on short poetry, huuuuur

Posted: Mar 16th, '12, 14:56
by Lag
Hurr...I guess, but I would have no idea what to do with the story idea. Hm, well, I could turn it to a legend of some sort...that will come in handy eventually. Yeaaaah. /mumbling to myself

Sure, I'll probably post it here if ever I do make one. OTL

Re: My attempt(s) on short poetry, huuuuur

Posted: Apr 13th, '12, 02:40
by Lilypad125
The poem is good just a bit too short.

Re: My attempt(s) on short poetry, huuuuur

Posted: Mar 9th, '19, 12:19
by Adalrico
Try and try again.)))