>3> I'm not sure in which order I'm writing just yet so bare with me. I want to know what you all think of this passage from my book.
My bare feet hit the ground, and I could'nt see where I was going, I just knew that I was going. I din't know how i was going, either. What force it was that was driving me to go, and why. I could feel the heart inside of me beat, and I was reasured by it. Simply said, I was wandering aimlessly where ever i was in this seemingly rough grounded area, then i heard some one call out my name. "Emma," "Hello?" I peeped, "Emma open your eyes." when I mannaged, i couldn't see the voice calling out to me to open my eyes, but the gravity of realizing just how short I was threw me too the ground, physcially I thumped loud enough for anyone near me to have heard the whimper i let out, as i met the ground with distain. I wiggled my toes, and for the first time, giggled at their ocwardness in shape, and sizes. Innocently, i stood back up, and took my first glance at a broken, baren seemingly lifeless land before me.
Miles and miles of land, with what seemed like nothingness for ages . In it i found no beauty, but I found the land that I was in to be honest - It was what it was, and in it's integrety it was true - Baren, full of emptiness and waste. To be awaken to a land so empty and scared seemed irrelevant to me, but for whatever reason it was that I was put here on this bleak uninteresting place for a purpose, i was here one reason or another, or atleast that's how i felt about it. To comprehend that I was all alone(To the best of my knowladge. I'm not really sure how I got here in the first place. or what i am.) was one thing, but to precive that I had nothing to do in this place but become thirsty and hungry and desperate for nurishment, attention and the essentials of life that any primal creature needs tortured me. Circle after circle I walked in constantly looking for something to damper the inward hurricane of pains and aches that called out for the very base needs of life.