I don't think anything should be changed! It's lovely~

The girl is cute and I like her shirt and the outfits make sense! Good job, Nan!

I got caught up with Maken-ki! So good, it was a slow start but it picked up and kept getting better and better... now the wait begins. I hate waiting... bleh!

*dumps feathers on Steven* I'm back! :D

Nan, I love the two pictures, they're so cute

edit: oh, heys Steven!
I thought of an anime you may like, Bakemonogatari, followed by Nisemonogatari, and the newest in the series Monogatari

I have realized something in the drawing... Those clothes are worn when they first met, meaning it's at night. Doesn't the girl's clothes seem a bit too casual? Like if she's going to a beach or something...

I need to draw another set of clothes How does a long sleeve (kind of oversized) sweater/shirt and a skirt with ribbon flats sound like? The top will be covering almost half of the skirt, I guess.

*hugs* And thank you, you guys are the best

hm, if it's at night, there could be a possibility that she was hanging out somewhere (friends house, late at school, ect) and she wasn't planning on staying so late, so she didn't have anything else to wear.

Oh and she could say stuff like "I'm late for my TV drama! D:" And then bumps into those mean guys, and the hero (?) saves her! :D Oh man, Amanda. Why you so smart.
But I still gotta change the outfit a bit xD I'll let her wear that when the beach scene comes! :D

that would work *nods*
can't wait to see the new outfit idea

Un, wait for it! *hugs even more*

D: Feathers!?

How late is her encounter with the guy? I don't think it'd be too casual of some clothes if she were out and about with some friends, or maybe her parents had her go to a convenience store to pick up a few things when she was spotted going into it by some ruffians who followed her on her way back and started the encounter and the guy just happened to be nearby and swooped in and saved her~

For some reason, I thought of 11 pm. But that's just too much. I should make it 8-9. Summer. It's going to be a bit chilly but the mom forces to go out with those clothes on :D
I think I'm going to go with the convenience store idea. But instead of them following her, I'll make her buy the stuff and ice cream (or a meat bun since it's night) as a treat, bump into one of the guys. (so the food will stain the clothes) and she gets in trouble! Then bam, comes the hero.
Ah, so excited.

I drew new clothes for her, but... it feels weird... sooo... nah. I stick with the original one :T

Awesome~

Collaborating on a story is fun and awesome, glad to be of some use!

I was told of this new manga, well... it's kind of old but it's new to me~ It's called Beast Master! And so far, it's interesting~