Actually it doesn't sound like a really typical shoujo manga. I have officially subscribed to you, you have to let me know when you put a bit of it out there!
Good luck Anne! Don't worry, you're sure to totes zing them with whatever you've done

Typically my kind of bad luck: having a cooking tea bag fall on my finger...

Time to make a eh... presentation... something x.x

Hinote no Akai wrote:Than maybe You would like my comic (that is still in plans) as it is shoujo, but not really concentrated about school but more about moral decisions and changes that they may cause. And [SPOILER ALERT ] it doesn't have a happy ending. [END OF SPOILER] There is love involved, but it's more like "You can choose what You want, but beware of the consequences". And what I can say, love is the strongest emotion.
Now as I look at it it does end up being shoujo... I should just go to bed...

Most shoujo I've read has angst that comes off as superficial feeling to me, and is super boring. But your story sounds way less silly and contrived. I would like to read it. c:
Even if it makes me cry buckets.

@Anne: I know that feel, I'm so sorry. :c But now karma owes you, so you can knock 'em dead in your presentation.

Hinote no Akai wrote:As Lotus said. It's a genre of manga/anime directed to young girls (jap. shoujo). So lots of flowers, sparkles and overall cuteness. Also lines are more delicate and generally main character is a pretty schoolgirl (middle or high school mostly).
In fact shoujos are good for getting more into culture as they are mostly school dramas or at least include school life in some part. Like in Sailor Moon

oooo like Dream Saga? <3

Yupperz. Your manga doesn't sound sappy and immature, more the opposite.
Yeah just do it Anne!
*waves a pom-pom for both Hino-chan and Anne*
EDIT: I can't figure out: How does the battling system work? And can I battle with Wild Knuffel?

OK thanks a lot Hino-chan
I think I'll adopt a wild. All I'll be missing out on is getting material when I dig, right?