Mikael Hart wrote:Oh, interesting.
I tend to invest in more culture than religion in fiction (although I know they overlap sometimes).
What are the pooka, knight, and lady like? Why do they ally themselves with her?
Well, one thing I read last night was something along the lines of, "Evil does not exist for evil itself. Evil is often an attempt to pursue something good in the wrong way." Maybe that would be helpful for you to form your villain.
Nothing wrong with having Caucasian characters, of course. Even if something's mainstream doesn't mean it's bad. Just because something's uncommon or unique doesn't make it good either. And this applies to more than just appearances. Gotta throw it out there. XD
Well I usually don't touch on religion in stories either, but this time I decided to go outside my comfort zone.
The pooka is a mischievous pest, who tags along just to annoy Elly. The knight was just supposed to go see the queen of the land to marry her, (he doesn't know Ellyona is the "queen"
*) and when she mentions that the monarch isn't there as she had just left "her" he goes to find the "queen". They come to the aid of the lady and she's infatuated with the knight and follows him around. The knight is full of himself and the lady is your stereotypical damsel in distress. So she's bossy and whinny.
*Inspired by my five year old who wants to be a king rather than a queen, I decided for Ellyona she's a king, which in her homeland is the highest gender neutral rank. So females can be kings and males can be queens. Depends on how they rank.
That would be great, if I could figure out what good thing done in a wrong way would be.
@ Nan. XD Hee!
I dunno if write for a certain personality type as I never notice. XD