I thought what she meant was that she used to one Etsy has on their homepage, but it's not the same, Etsy's is like 10x as long.
But Jacob, I don't think your PP is sufficiant like this.
You use Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, pcistudio and Linkedin, as you use their plugins, so you would need to include them in your PP.
You also use Disqus on your blog, so you also need one for that and possibly also for Google+ as Disqus let's you comment with Google + (not sure whether that would already be covered with the Disqus privacy policy...)
Also, your privacy policy is not a click-able link, you need to copy and paste the URL that's there. Not sure that's allowed, as I think your privacy policy needs to be accessable for every page with one click.
You also use Format for your shop, so that's another privacy policy you need to cover.
It's all...not so easy
